I love this poem its excellent 5/5

I like the line
Like a baby, not knowing what's happening around you
Very strong showing of ignorance.

Great job.

Love this dominique!!
i know how you feel!!

I don't really critique much so don't expect that but this was good i really don't know what else to say

I really liked this poem it has alot of emotion in it and it isnt very long yet it conveys so much great job!! 5/5

This is a great poem reflecting such passionate desire