Comments : A time to remember

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I really liked this!
    Its true and has so much meaning!
    They all lay their life down for us to live in piece and no one appreciates them! I thank you for that!
    And I would suggest though to make this in a better format so it would be eaiser to read!5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lauren

    This is a great poem. It has a lot of feelings and emotion and glory in it. I really liked it. It's really well written and I think it is a really nice salute to the soldiers who are fighting.

    A suggestion like violent said maybe change the format. other than that it is a really great poem. 5/5. Loved It!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Its so sad wat war can do to a country. we r splitting and its so terrible..

    i love the flow. it really kept my attention. another great piece of work by you. keep up the good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Another expressive poem - your style is very good =] The way you word your poetry adds more depth to the piece. Great job once again

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    This is really good. its very expressive, and you did a good job writing this one.

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Loved everything about thie poem. Flow, style, and especially the topic. Sometimes people don't realise just how much soldiers do for our country. Nicely expressed, 5/5. Em