by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Nov 5, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Will you take my breath away, |
Stunning!! I really enjoyed reading your poem. Well done! |
by Blissful
So beautiful! I could just feel the love you were expressing with your words. There were a few places where the rhyme seemed forced and it affected the flow but your use of imagery was flawless which made this poem a worthwhile read. I cant wait until you tell me when it happens! :] |
by Krista
I really liked it. It was very, um, breath taking as you described the area around them. The details were great, as always. |