Comments : First Time

  • 16 years ago

    by Krista

    I really liked it. It was very, um, breath taking as you described the area around them. The details were great, as always.
    Love it. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    So beautiful! I could just feel the love you were expressing with your words. There were a few places where the rhyme seemed forced and it affected the flow but your use of imagery was flawless which made this poem a worthwhile read. I cant wait until you tell me when it happens! :]

    *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Lameez Petersen

    Stunning!! I really enjoyed reading your poem. Well done!