Comments : Fireworks (Cinquain)

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Very visual this poem is, Guy Fawkes is out of control in our country like so many other things. I used to love it too when people were more considerate. Now i keep my dogs in doors.
    It is similar to a Haiku is it not

    Well done Michael

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Nice work on the format, my friend Michael!
    I don't know all these special events, but it sounds great!

    (((hugs)))

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice job on this form. Your imgery paints a picture. It takes me back to summer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael
    Another great piece you have penned. Painting your words into a vision for the mind.
    Great job!
    ((Hugs))
    Cindy