This is a "delightful" poem! It is one of those rare short pieces that carrys with it a deft flowing that, like a fast flowing stream's under
tow, encases the reciever in its spirit and release doesn't come till its end...an end that has decided for itself when it is finished.

There is a spry yet wry tonal quality in it that delivers the substance which in verity could depress, yet instead brings forth with sardonic aplomb reality plain and simple!

Oh my...
this is amazing. I absolutely love this poem. The depths you reached in so few words were incredible. There really are no adjectives to describe the aftertaste i got from this poem, just that i loved every dripping word.

--HollywoodSmile

WOW i loved this poem everything you wrote was so powerful! You have a wondergift in poetry, really amazing. :)