by ViolentlyDisturbed Nov 6, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I have no inspiration left in my heart |
Poem was from the heart, you can tell. The flow was okay, my advice is try to give it a consistent rhyme scheme. The rhymes were good, maybe a bit forced, but good. The meaning of the poem is... real. So many ppl now write poems to stop feeling, you're writing about lack of it. Good job |