Oh, see I like this one!
It's a perfect little snapshot of a feeling.
Not even an emotion, just feeling sick.
5/5

For me this poem just doesn't do it, it is very short and thrown together "in my eyes" that is. The flow was off in my opinion but the structure was spot on just wish it had more stanzas to develop the meaning behind the poem more.

Overall not your best work I felt. 4/5 from me since you did give it some thought.

Peace, Joe