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by Ares Nov 6, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
I've been building a dream, for you and me dear. softly I caress your hips, waiting for the pleasure of... you keep me lingering, like a boy who can't take no, for an answer, like a priest who cannot pray, to a God he doesn't know. out in the dark we kiss, as a couple of idiots. neatly I fold our bodies, inject me in to your bloodstream! wait for the bell to ring. you keep me lingering, like a boy who can't take no, for an answer. like a leader lost his people, to the pack of wolves.
by Gabba Gabba Hey
Not much time to comment (class ends in a minute) But I read this poem a while ago, and I haven't a clue why I didn't comment it. I love how the first stanza ends with a borken off sentence, that adds a lot more meaning to the words. Well written, full of tangible yearning, moving last line. Sorry this is so short and less than usual! Great write!