A pool of broken glass

by Ares   Nov 6, 2008


I spent my days drinking till,
my brain was made of liquor.
you kept me insane enough,
at least I felt original.

you broke me down,
to put me back as a,
man you once did love.

you picked my words,
apart like pieces of wood.
no wonder you understood.

I swim in a pool of broken glass.
I'm having trouble letting you pass.
shoot me if I seem pathetic now.
I'm having trouble getting over you.

I spent my days drinking till,
the world looked like an oyster.
you kept me flying high,
at least they saw me live.

you made my heart,
feel like a sack of vipers,
deadly kisses through the night.

you shot me through a,
brick wall behind your door.
at least we touched each others core.

I swim in a pool of broken glass.
I'm having trouble letting you pass.
shoot me if I seem pathetic now.
I'm having trouble getting over you.

Sue my pathetic lifestyle - and love me like you did.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Wow. Wow.

    These last two poems that I've read have been exceedingly good. They all ring of sadness. A different turn!
    I love the way you describe the drinking. Very...noir.
    I love this!