WOW!!
I was so attracted to the poem, felt like i was watching a movie and wanted to know the end, nice one ingrid, thank you for your beautiful comments, take care :)

Wow, that was amazing! It was a situation we can all relate to, and i could really see your emotions in it.....also it sounds like a really hard style, i dont think i could ever do it! you are extremely talented!

^^^It was not a forbidden love, but an online love affair. I should have known it would end tragically, because they always do..well most of them:(
Thank you for the compliment, coming from you it really means a lot:)

I loved it. it gave me chills reading it actually. you worded it so well, i felt like i was in the situation.
The way you write is spectacular. many writers could learn a lot from reading your poems.
5/5

GOOD
TOUCHS TO HEART.

Hello Ma'am,

Absolutely awesome poem. Its a wonderful poem to read. I cant really express what I am feeling after reading this poem. Kindly forgive me because I don't know the technical names of different types of poems but as an avid reader of yours, I can proudly scream that this is the besssst poem to date... I wish I can shower more praises by adding a few more lines but you can guess by now that what you have created is nothing less than a magnus opus.

Regards,
Bhavin

Not an easy form but you nailed it. Excellent job.

I loved this poem so much. It expressed so well what I felt for someone and still do. Very beautiful poem. Great job.

Really nicely done, Enjoyed!!!

Tee hee...the entire poem only has one period. :]

Those last two lines were brilliantly executed my dear. Bravo! ^_^

The parts that rhymed were lovely and every aspect of the poem had this sort of longing ahhh I love you but...Feeling to it. It was very interesting. It's like you were inside someone's head and they wouldn't shut up. Lol. I mean that in the best of ways. :]

Five out of five.