Senses

Original and appealing to the five senses~
I liket the flow and the style
Very natural flow
Short and to the point
However, I think its too short. The poem came to a sudden stop. I suggest on writing something like a 'concluding line' to indicate that the ending of the poem is near.

Very original formating with though provoking meaning
5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Wow that was kinda interesting i have never seen a poem written that way before. i loved the sytle in wich it was done, it was claer and understandable, and it had a decent flow
Raindrops 5/5

This was really a simple poem, and some of the times I thought you just wanted to make the poem rhyme so you threw a word in there so that it sounded like the poem had a flow.. which is perfectly fine but it seems forced which doesnt really make the poem all too appealing. I would have like more detail to this poem, it was simple.. it did use all five senses soo good job with that.. but I guess I just thought there had to have been more in your mind while writing this. Anyways, well done. I will give you a 4.5/5 for this. :] Which rounds up to 5.

The flow is good, it's like differnt explosions of ideas and senses.

However the thing that I noticed wa the rhyming, it was forced and unrealistic. If you don't use a perfect rhyme nobody is going to rate you down

To laugh,
To cry,
To hear these things soar high.

It really feels like you added the high just to rhyme

still a great poem mate, thanks