Short and to the point, I liked the way the flow as well as the structure was done. Nice write. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

This was a good poem because it was simple and short, it didnt need explaining because the title gave us the meaning of the poem. I especially liked the last line of this stanza
'To touch,
To feel,
To know these things be real.'

The flow seemed good, the only thing was the rhyming sounded a little forced, particularly in the third stanza.. The last line just didnt seem to make sense. Maybe would be better changed to a more suited rhyming word (Swapping around eat and drink would probably make this easier). (Oh, and please correct me if I'm just too stupid to understand the line lol, it does happen a lot!)
Overall, good poem, thanks :)
Sole x

I'm not going to lie, I didn't understand it to much. I mean I know that you were talking about sense but I think that you should have put a little more feeling into it. But that's just me. But your rhyme scheme was interesting. 4/5 Overall it was pretty good

*Mya*

To laugh,
To cry,
To hear these things soar high.

This stanza isn't the best. You don't tend to hear things soar, you see them. I think you need to come up with another thing(?for lack of a better word) for it.

"To know these things be real."
To know things ARE real

The rhyme in this is the main focus, however it isn't very strong. A few times in there it doesn't make sense what you're trying to say.

I still really liked this. The idea of it is quite unique, and I like how it is formatted, short and sweet. At first I wasn't sure why it was in the nature category but then I realise you're talking about animals anyway. Although perhaps it belongs in life?
Eh either way, really.

A fairly solid poem, 4/5

jess ~

It was a very flowish style and quite simple which isnt bad, i liked it, short but sweet.^^

Nice! This poem refreshed me in some weird way. Good job!

The flow is good, it's like differnt explosions of ideas and senses.

However the thing that I noticed wa the rhyming, it was forced and unrealistic. If you don't use a perfect rhyme nobody is going to rate you down

To laugh,
To cry,
To hear these things soar high.

It really feels like you added the high just to rhyme

still a great poem mate, thanks

This was really a simple poem, and some of the times I thought you just wanted to make the poem rhyme so you threw a word in there so that it sounded like the poem had a flow.. which is perfectly fine but it seems forced which doesnt really make the poem all too appealing. I would have like more detail to this poem, it was simple.. it did use all five senses soo good job with that.. but I guess I just thought there had to have been more in your mind while writing this. Anyways, well done. I will give you a 4.5/5 for this. :] Which rounds up to 5.

Wow that was kinda interesting i have never seen a poem written that way before. i loved the sytle in wich it was done, it was claer and understandable, and it had a decent flow
Raindrops 5/5

Very original formating with though provoking meaning
5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Original and appealing to the five senses~
I liket the flow and the style
Very natural flow
Short and to the point
However, I think its too short. The poem came to a sudden stop. I suggest on writing something like a 'concluding line' to indicate that the ending of the poem is near.