Reading your poem, makes me laugh. I remember the last week at school before holiday, i felt the same as in your poem.
very good poem that makes me laugh, keep it up, kel.

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

Heh a few words are missing here and there. Its started strong but you got a lil lazy at the end :p

I agree with Lenny, but besides that, i really liked the poem, it made me remember back a few years to my last day of school. funny poem, 4/5

Lol i liked it. Although i do agree with lenny, started off really well but the ending wasnt quite as well written, and theres a few spelling errors. But apart from that its an exceptionally good write. =] Great work. 5/5