I love this one!! 5/5

The reader can sense the sadness in these words you have expressed in this write…may you find the peace and joy that you seek deep within your heart once again soon….take care young lady.

sadaddy

Awww... though this poem was only made up of a few lines, i can feel the sadness through the poem.Well if you don't say it out then no one will know, so yeah do talk to someone whom you can trust. Nicely done5/5

Very powerful lines, Katie.
This is my first poem by you and I am coming back to read more.

This poem was intensely sad, but written really well.
Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow, so much emotion and intensity in such a small write. Im amazed. Very powerful poem, and again, its so simply written. Nice choice of words. Im not sure what else to say, except its clear you write from the heart! =] which isnt always easy to do. So great work! 5/5