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by ether
I think I'd like this more if I was an American, you guys don't have such a great repuation in Australia. But this was short, simple, sweet and to the point. A lot of people Obama will bring great change, let's just hope it happens and it's for the better. 5/5, I liked this. jess ~
by DarkCrystalbtrfy
Short but to the point. Your rhyme scheme is preasent through out the entire poem. My favorite line would have to be: Power has shifted The significance of this line is increadbly prominate. if this line wasent here your poem woudl defenatly be lacking Well Written