Comments : Once upon a time

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    I WANT TO KNOW THE SECRET!!! really really badly. Your poem was amazing and i loved it so much. you have a special gift with words. 10/5 (whispered voice) what is the secret? lol. ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Whispers "kim, i cant tell you on here." whispers so you can barley hear me, "pm me"

  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Very beautiful poem. You are so talented.
    What's a pity she'd kept the secret, that's bad. I think she'd hard times having confident in someone which is bad.
    great write, it merits 5/5 ( there is just a little correction to be made. you wrote to, it should be too, but we all do that) kel.