by Steven Topaz Nov 6, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
May it be a task as to forgive, |
by Jenni Marie
Okay..can I just say..I LOVE this. |
by Teria
This is a good poem. Once again you're doing the rhyme scheme thing. It's not as bad in this poem as the other two I read but it's still there. BUT, these are the rhymes you want to use if you do. Or at least most of them. one thing I don't suggest is rhymes (MOST OF THE TIME) under 4 letters. Those are the cheesiest ones. Be creative and such. Use your imagination. |
"Our world so cold and filled with hatrid." |
Wow those were ahhmmazin. not alot of people write about things like that and i love it. |
May it be a task as to forgive, |