Ruby Red Tears

Oh, dang. Very powerful, very angry. It was an excellent poem. A few spelling mistakes, but still a wonderful write. Aagh, need I say more on such a beautiful, intense, and captivating work of art?? If I could I would give you a 7/5. Keep up the great work.
WakingFreedom

Well I really thought the poem was unique in many ways, the imagery is very strong and the title alone catches the readers eye. The poem forces the reader to think and ask questions. Why are these tears ruby red? does it symbolize blood from all the pain and abuse or are they the eyes of some sort of animal? I thought the flow was really good and the word choice as well, but spelling mistakes took a lot away from it....but thats an easy fix. All in all I thought the poem was unique and it left me wondering, excellent job 5/5 GG23

Spelling mistakes

Scared - Scarred
Quickning - Quickening
Completly - Completely
Loosing - Losing
Rapadly - Rapidly
Quicking - Quickening

Wow this is powerful. I love how you making this strong not fluffy duffy or anything, facing this reality thought it full of beautiful lines Years of lost confessions and such :)
I don't know if it's true, but I see like you are talking here about soon to be a killer or even serial killer. It was just my first thought, lines like
Is your mind, chaos completly
Filling up every inch of your soul
Dont look now your loosing control
or
Sadly enough they wont live to see another day

And it's brilliant how you talking about the sad side and the feelings about this person and how messed up they are inside.
It got me really thinking, touched me.

Remarkable work, my dear!

5/5 for sure

"closeted off from humanity
Is your mind, chaos completly"

The seeming loss of our self, the ideal seems to be a focus in your work lately. You are doing very well with the srong use of lange at the end, creating a cataclismic sensation in the reader as the last words express the emotion of the piece with a intense yet smooth description.