by Nanita Nov 7, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Do you feel how fast my heart beats |
by Not Enough
Awesome. Excellent. Amazing. I really liked the way you were asking questions all the way through I like poems like that. The flow was great. Exellent emotion. The last line is the best. Such emotion in few words. |
by IML
Questions that love will always bring each and ever day and hearing the right answer always is soothing. |
by Ixora
Beautiful poem hun. you really felt all the emotions as they were so simply written. i loved it. |
This was really cute. I can see the emotion is so clear and strong. It flows well, and i liked the questions... overall, amazing job. Truthfully, its one of the better i've seen on this site. |
This was really cute. I can see the emotion is so clear and strong. It flows well, and i liked the questions... overall, amazing job. Truthfully, its one of the better i've seen on this site. |