I Love You

by Nanita   Nov 7, 2008


Do you feel how fast my heart beats
when it hears your name?
Do you see my body shake
when I see you walk my way?
Do you see me blushing
whenever you look at me?
Do you see the smile on my face
everytime I think of you?
Do you hear that I'm nervous
whenever I speak to you?
Do you see the sparkle in my eyes
when I have you in sight?
Do you know that I love you?

Can you feel when my heart stops
whenever it knows you're gone?
Can you feel my body go numb
as you begin to walk away?
Can you see the blank look on my face
cause I don't know when I'll see you again?
Can you see my smile disappear
whenever I don't have you near?
Can you hear my cries at night
cause I know there's nothing I can do?
Can you see the tears that fall
cause I can't take you being away any longer?
Can you tell that I miss you?

Would you remind me of my beauty
even if I'm only in pajamas?
Would you console me when I'm down
even if you didn't know what happened?
Would you take me out to eat
for no apparent reason?
Would you kiss me in the mornings
when you wake up and say I Love You?
Would you still hold my hand
even if your boys were around?
Would you show me off to the world
or be too ashamed and keep me at home?
Would you love me?

[HisBbyLove]

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  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Awesome. Excellent. Amazing. I really liked the way you were asking questions all the way through I like poems like that. The flow was great. Exellent emotion. The last line is the best. Such emotion in few words.

  • 16 years ago

    by IML

    Questions that love will always bring each and ever day and hearing the right answer always is soothing.
    good poem :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Beautiful poem hun. you really felt all the emotions as they were so simply written. i loved it.

    .[Bow].

  • 16 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    This was really cute. I can see the emotion is so clear and strong. It flows well, and i liked the questions... overall, amazing job. Truthfully, its one of the better i've seen on this site.
    Never stop writing :)
    *Chaotic Angel*
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    This was really cute. I can see the emotion is so clear and strong. It flows well, and i liked the questions... overall, amazing job. Truthfully, its one of the better i've seen on this site.
    Never stop writing :)
    *Chaotic Angel*
    5/5