Not worth the pain

by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill   Nov 7, 2008


HOw CAn thiS Be ?
i thOuGht iT wAs juST u & Me ;
wAS juSt tO Blind tO See
yOu WerEnt gOoD EnOuGh fOr me ;
TrYinG tO mOve On .
Buh it HuRtSz tO muCH inSIDe ;
juST hAVe TO Wait till TheSe FeelinGsz DiE .

WhEn i SeE yOu WAlkinG dOwn DhA StrEet ;
ii FeEl liKe FalLinG At Ur FeEt.
&
DOinG yOur EvErY cOmAnD ;
DAmN yOur jUSt A MAn .
Buh iiT All ChAnGeSz WHEn yOu COme ArOunD .

Ill JuST KEep LiStEninG tO TheSe HOrriD sOunDsz ;
Of TheSe TearSz dROwninG me ;
&
All My PriDe .
DamN DuDe juST WaNa Die!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Clown

    Interesting work, You want to move on, but something inside keeps you commited to him, I enjoyed it. The pain you felt for this guy just dosent go away no matter what you try.

  • 15 years ago

    by Clown

    Interesting work, You want to move on, but something inside keeps you commited to him, I enjoyed it. The pain you felt for this guy just dosent go away no matter what you try.

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  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I like the poem, just don't like how the words are put, with capatalizations like that, it hurts eyes to read. but the message was good enough for a 5/5 rating.

  • 15 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow this is a very emotional poem i love it. I love how you wrote it by the way i love that style. this poem is very good I have put it on my fav poem list 1000/1000

    ~~~Nikkie~~~

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