I think that *which made Him created* should be *which made Him create*.

This poem is deeply touching. The intensity of the emotions that you described is simply overwhelming. I enjoyed in this amazing write from the beginning to the end, it sounds like it's written straight from the heart, seemingly simple but filled with such remarkable positivity.
Greatly written and truly memorable piece.

The idea of love is eternal:

I love you so much.

It began from the moment Allah created the world.
Love from Allah,
which made Him create the world
From The Big Bang's intensity
Which envelopes me from from head to toes.
Power which makes me want to unite my soul to yours.

I Love you so much..

..that this world would hush listening to my heart proclamation.

I Love you so much.

That everything but the whispers in the early morning
Will decay
When I drown into you like I would drown into ocean, releasing my love to you.

I love you so much.
^
Noor this is beautiful..I have altered bits and re-structured it. This is only a suggestion, so please use all or none of them.

A great piece of honest, true love.

Take care

Michael x