Comments : Desert Wind

  • 20 years ago

    by julie

    She reached out with her heart and I took hold.
    We followed the calm warm breeze
    Of the deserts father.
    Hoping it leads us to a place where
    Trees have roots for emotions to graze

    I especially love that bit, and the last few lines made quite an impact, it would be better though i think if you expaneded on that last bit?
    Julie