Hey You

by the girl in blue   Nov 8, 2008


It's the way you look at me.
it's the way your hand brushes mine.
it's the way you call my name.
it's the way you hold me tight.
you're the reason I lay awake at night.
you're the reason I'm so distracted.
you're the reason a smile is on my face.
you're the reason my heart skips a beat.
you have become my life.
you have become my breath.
you have become the song that I sing.
you have become my everything.
i needed you yesterday.
i need you today.
i'll need you tomorrow.
i need you for life.
will you stay with me?
will you hold me close?
will you dry my tears?
will you keep me safe?
i love the way you say I love you.
i love the way you calm my fears.
i love the way you say goodnight.
i love the way you call me Boo.
tell me you need me.
tell me you care.
tell me you'll stay.
tell me you're happy.
i want to be Mrs. You.
i want to spend forever in your arms.
i want to hear your voice everyday.
i want to know you more.
you're like the cherry on top.
you're like money in the bank.
you're like the sun in the sky.
you're like grass beneath my feet.
kiss me like you mean it.
say I love you with truth.
hold me and never let me go.
just love me out loud.

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  • 14 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Excellent poem, it is really good, i cant wait for you to write more. I'm gonna be putting my poems and doing skis and such on you tube at ItsAJGTV. hopfully i will have your support.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Very meaningful and to the point. I like it very much! (5/5)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I think that you over did the repetition by a lot. It made it hard for me to enjoy it. Other then that it was ok. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Woooow, this poem was full of repetition, and to be honest with you.. that's why I didn't really enjoy it.. I thought it really took away from the words you were trying to say. :/ A little repetition is okay, but I thought you kind of went over a bit here. Eliminate some of the repetition and word in it your own words so that it's unique and appealing to the reader. 4/5.

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