Comments : Cold Rain

  • 14 years ago

    by Miss Sunfire

    Aside from the typo in the last stanza this is perfection. I love it. Your feeling conveyed is so raw. I do wish your pain to all be washed away. Remember to look for the rainbow after it all.

  • 14 years ago

    by Miss Sunfire

    Aside from the typo in the last stanza this is perfection. I love it. Your feeling conveyed is so raw. I do wish your pain to all be washed away. Remember to look for the rainbow after it all.