Very nice meena. Nice to see you back after a long absence. Let me know if u are still on Yahoo. I have the same name as always.

I enjoyed this poem. I had to read it a few times before I actually seemed to understand it.

I really enjoyed the poem and felt that it was one of the really good expressions that you have released in a while.

I'm thinking it was very enjoyable.

5/5

WELCOME BACK MY DEAR!!!!

It took me some time to catch up to you but just read this piece I am happy to see you ave not lost your touch or need to write its been some time. Please get back to me and tell me whats going on with you have alot of time to catch up on. I have wrote a few pieces but I guess I will have to get back to the grind myself. Takle care and hope to hear from you soon. Your Fellow poet and friend Robert....

Very strong and captivating piece of writing. Good structure and good expression of thoughts. Enjoyable!

This is excellent and very well written. I could not decide which line meant the most to me.

These three make profound statements:
"in the dungeon of misery her soul fights smiling, it will not last."

"If only the wand of time is in her hands to undo this bitter reality
maybe another path of joy and freedom will become her true destiny,".

It is as if you have stepped into my mind and read my thoughts.

An excellently written piece, Meena.
"Years know no forgiveness as it furiously lashes out the past in the dungeon of misery her soul fights smiling, it will not last." A dark and engrossing poem and I particularly loved that line.
All the best Meena,
Ben