A very sad and melancholy piece, the poem shows a lot of regrets and for some reason you seem to feel your worth in the relationship has been reduced, not good. Your willingness to part and stay friends is most commendable. All in All a fairly well written poem, the meter was slightly off but no matter. |
by ash
Shit i am into tears....... |
by Roxiee An
I was in a bad mood today being in a similar situation. Atleast your poems makes me dedicate it to her though she was a good friend but I feel almost the same.. good poem as always....... |