Oh! such a powerful amazing poem, you really did put a lot of emotion in this, its a real tear jerker, even the title is just so strong on its own.

i think this is really good and i hope you write loads more.

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Woow, reading this poem gave me the chills and just about put me to tears.. I'm pretty sure this is a true story, because I remember hearing this guys name come up at one point in time.. anyways.. very sad write.. you really did a great job with the emotions and the storyline.. you reader feels every little feeling or emotion so very well while reading it.. they picture this so vividly with every word.. some of your word choice was excellent, and it added to the poem quite a bit. Excellently written. Almost brought me to tears. 5/5.