This piece is absolutely wonderful. It's been a while since I've read something from you. The title so perfectly fits what you've written, and every word is beautiful. I like how you not only focused on the fact that you're losing love, but how it's making you feel. It was an extremely emotional piece, and you've done a great job.

Five out of five. [5/5]

Briana

Temps,

there is so much pain here. Pain with the vivid desciption of the terrible loss of life of one so small, so fragile. Then more pain as the the loss torments you. The memory of the death haunts you, preventing any sence of healing to occur. Finally the pain takes another fragile soul, now demented and ready to leave this cold world that never warmed, not since cold pain filled it.

Well done, so very painful, so very good!

Michael