Comments : Making no promise to listen

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    A few spelling mistakes in the poem but the feelings were well expressed and you are right, i think everyone goes through the thoughts of how dyin would be easier, but it dont make you crazy. keep writing x

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Ur nor crazy. This was a great way to write about suicide (or thts what i got out of it) really good. Theh rhythem is a little off but i think u could fix that.