Hidden Pain

by PassionCourageTriumph   Nov 8, 2008


She sits all alone.
No one there.
Wanting to talk.
Wanting someone to care.

She went through life
One day at a time.
Always glowing with confidence,
Like everything was fine.

She was happy,
At least that's what she led others to believe.
In reality she hurt
But when she cried for help no one cared to see.

Others tore at her spirits,
Simply because they felt they could.
"Joke" around a little.
If only they understood.

She brought herself down
With hatred from within.
Always wanting to be the beautiful talented person
That her friends had always been.

She never wanted sympathy.
Just someone who understood,
How bad she wanted to laugh and love.
But everyone withstood.

It finally became too much.
She had no one.
Not a single person to listen,
No shoulder to cry on.

They found her in her room,
A year ago this day.
Hung by her own hands.
Because of her own dismay.

This girl who was happy,
Charitable, funny, and sweet.
Dead and gone now,
Her life never to complete.

People think about her,
Every now and again.
Wondering what would have happened
If they had put out a helping hand.

The problem with many
Is that they do not see.
The pain that is hidden
Behind a face that seems so happy.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Did i just read ur profile right? how u said ur not much of a poet? Um...this was kind of ..... AMAZING!!! I loved it. It was so powerful. But sad. It was really excellent. 5/5 and nothing less. and added to my favs.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    Well well well.. this was fantastic.
    She was happy,
    At least that's what she led others to believe.
    In reality she hurt,
    But when she cried for help no one cared to see.

    ^^ Favourite stanza.

    It finally became to much.
    ^^
    Should be too.

    Just some one who understood,
    ^^ ^
    Someone should be joined.
    And it is not necessary for a , at the end of a line in a poem. :)
    There was a few commas at the end of lines, but im not going to put them all in here..

    Overall a really great poem.. i really enjoyed reading it.
    Keep up the great work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by TouchYourHeart

    Omg that is wonderful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    4th stanze from the bottom reads... They found her is her room... is = in?

    i really like this poem, i think you have took a very very true situation and worded it powerfully.

    you have drew the readers attention from the start and kept the flow of the poem through out which keeps the readers attention.

    i realte to this poem and you send out a clear message.

    5/5, a really good job, hope to read mroe from you! xx

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