by Dark Savior Nov 8, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
There are many different ways to feel |
I liked this poem. The flow was ok though it kind of got off near the end where it was a bit harder to read. I like poems about poetry and you expressed your feelings well and I think its quite relatable by others. I know when I write its to get the darker more negative emotions out of my body..its a nice release. Though occasionally i have happy poems. Well done with this poem and keep up the good work. |
Haha (: This is fabulous. "That is what most people try to do, I'm sure at one point, you did too. " How did you know (; This piece really brought a smile to my face, which was well needed so first of all thank you. I have been somewhat in a writing 'slump' which for me is very odd. I have never believed in writers block, and this poem has been a slap upside the head; reminding me that you can write whatever might be on your heart, at any time. |
by Ingrid
I do hope those last two lines are just a figurative speech, otherwise the Shaun I do like will be gone as well:( |
by Meena Krish
:) its one of those poems thaqt makes you smile and agree with the poet. Simple yet there is a good feel to it. |
by Sylvia
Very well written. I write as a form of therapy and can say things in my poems "without worry of retaliation". Thanks for voicing these things that most of us must feel as well. Well done. |