Comments : Feeling Poetry

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very well written. I write as a form of therapy and can say things in my poems "without worry of retaliation". Thanks for voicing these things that most of us must feel as well. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    :) its one of those poems thaqt makes you smile and agree with the poet. Simple yet there is a good feel to it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I do hope those last two lines are just a figurative speech, otherwise the Shaun I do like will be gone as well:(

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Haha (: This is fabulous. "That is what most people try to do, I'm sure at one point, you did too. " How did you know (; This piece really brought a smile to my face, which was well needed so first of all thank you. I have been somewhat in a writing 'slump' which for me is very odd. I have never believed in writers block, and this poem has been a slap upside the head; reminding me that you can write whatever might be on your heart, at any time.

    "Poetry is the release for the epidemic
    when things aren't feeling copacetic. "

    These two lines are the best thing I have
    read in a while! The rhyme, the meaning,
    the flow: this poem was wonderful! The importance of simplicity (;

    Keep writing
    down the bones,
    `Nova

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    I liked this poem. The flow was ok though it kind of got off near the end where it was a bit harder to read. I like poems about poetry and you expressed your feelings well and I think its quite relatable by others. I know when I write its to get the darker more negative emotions out of my body..its a nice release. Though occasionally i have happy poems. Well done with this poem and keep up the good work.