by BREEawNUHH Nov 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
*Actual Title: A Look Into The Heart Of A Girl Who Has Found A New Love* |
OMG!! |
by biancaa
I like it. problem and resolve. good job =) |
I like the (kind of) surprise ending. =] how at first you were getting over him then you were like, he wont hurt me like you did. |
by Mr. Darcy
Bree, |
Very sweet, simple.. yet it explains that in this short period of time you've found someone who takes away the pain and strife and he has your heart. Simple, yet beautiful. It's a good start to pick your writing back up where you left off. Keep it up. Don't give up. I look forward to more poems sooon. (: 5/5 Glad to see you writing again! |