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by meganmarie Nov 9, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
Twilight comes you're still not home she starts to worry will you come back? 6 months today you left for war with one last kiss you left without a word she waited here praying for your safe return sad truth about it the chances are slim twilight turns to night still you haven't come home she knows he's never coming back and tears erupt from her eyes as she heads off to bed the front door closes her soldier came home as he holds close to his heart
by Michael Verterel
Beautifully done, perfect ending... Though i believed it would have been better if it ended tragic. Maybe you could write this one over in a tragic ending, either way it's perfect as is, just a suggestion i guess...