Leaves of Fall

by Katie   Nov 9, 2008


Hello pretty leaves
of red, yellow, brown, and green.
Do you know just how beautiful
you are to me?

You're scattered around,
in patterns of nature.
Beautifying the ground.
I sigh a happy sound.

Red leaves so daring
Scarlet colors so boldly wearing.

Amber leaves of yellow
Seem to radiate and glow.

The lovely leaves of brown,
make fall beauty so renowned.

Green leaves left over
from the warm days of summer.

Thank you Mother Nature
for giving us your Earth,
and for leaving me in awe,
of the leaves of fall.

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  • 16 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Congrats.5/5.A beautiful poem.Enjoyed every bit of it.Lovely imagery to descibe the gifts of Mother Nature.Keep it up.God bless.

  • 16 years ago

    by ToTormentedToEvenCare

    This is excellent i love how well it is put together
    ... it makes me happy to read it ...lol
    =)

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    This poem was as bright and colourful as the leaves u so beautifuly described.
    the use of imagery was amplified by the rhymes and together it made a really enjoyable read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ahhhhhhhhhh this is BEAUTIFUL!

    I love the imagery you placed throughout this piece, it really created stunning vivid pictures in my mind for me as the reader, it was almost like I could -see- everything that you were describing.

    I thought it flowed well throughout and the tone of the poem left me with a feeling of serenity.

    I thought this was really pretty, the flow, the content, the wording all just melts together to create a beautiful read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this poem. The word you used to decribe the leaves were great. I see nothing wrong or that needs fixed. I gave it a 5/5.