The color u use and decribe were very nice. and i love the fall too n winter. nice words u chose. Keep it up. i like it. =)

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

I am impressed by the personification of the natural beauty of fall. This poem is also a combination of imagery and how these images make us feel

Well done

I really liked this poem. The word you used to decribe the leaves were great. I see nothing wrong or that needs fixed. I gave it a 5/5.

Ahhhhhhhhhh this is BEAUTIFUL!

I love the imagery you placed throughout this piece, it really created stunning vivid pictures in my mind for me as the reader, it was almost like I could -see- everything that you were describing.

I thought it flowed well throughout and the tone of the poem left me with a feeling of serenity.

I thought this was really pretty, the flow, the content, the wording all just melts together to create a beautiful read.

This poem was as bright and colourful as the leaves u so beautifuly described.
the use of imagery was amplified by the rhymes and together it made a really enjoyable read.

This is excellent i love how well it is put together
... it makes me happy to read it ...lol
=)

Congrats.5/5.A beautiful poem.Enjoyed every bit of it.Lovely imagery to descibe the gifts of Mother Nature.Keep it up.God bless.