Wow, Cindy. That was awesome. I loved the wording and style of it. I thought the emotion was strong and powerful and made me want to cry (Though everything does these days) i thought you did a brilliant jpb.
Love Tara-Kay

Cindy ,I think this is the best I have read of your work so moving and Real. It really brought tears to my eyes. I love the form and flow of it. Excellent Cindy!

Great poem Cindy!

At times I feel you near me
The smell of your cologne hangs in the air
If the wind blows through the trees just right
I can almost hear your voice calling my name
How I miss that sound.

Truly, we miss our loveones. Their memories keep us strong.

"Hearts may stopped but Forever Love goes on."

Your friend,
Ray

Cindy,

each and every word has so much emotion behind it, making the whole piece so sad.

As a poem its structure is such that the lines that you want to have maximum impact, do just that, they reach out and grabs your empathy and pulls it so hard.

I believe that all good poems should grab the reader, evoke their responses and make them think. This poem makes you think hard and makes you appreciate the good that we have in our lives and to never take it for granted, because life is precious and sadly too fragile.

Well done on an excellent piece.

((hugs))

Michael

Very very good job you really do a great job of making the reader feel your pain i really felt for you like it sounds so painful to go through and im sorry : / you wrote this poem very well though! 5/5

Cindy
I feel this is one of your best pieces. Such depth of feeling, and honesty. It's a remarkable work.

Your magical words has made every single reader's eyes wet. Simple things that we do in life and mostly end up taking for granted, all those has been mentioned with emotions and i am sure the true value will stay deep inside for a long time.
Great write dear, it deserves to be read by thousands.
You are simply awesome.

all the best and take care

Very nice Cindy, I really enjoyed this piece. It automatically drew me to my aunt because it sounds so much like what she has been going through since my uncles passing last year. Thank you for sharing it, great job.

Excellent. Brought tears to my eyes and I can feel the pain in your words. The images you painted with your words are breathtaking.

It's so sad. is it about some one you knew?

5/5

Cindy ~hugs~

You have moved me to tears dear friend.

At times I feel you near me
The smell of your cologne hangs in the air
If the wind blows through the trees just right
I can almost hear your voice calling my name
How I miss that sound
^^^
No one can even begin to imagine the pain behind these words until they have lost a loved one. The smell that still lingers and the voice that still whispers. The feeling that pounds deep in the heart and yearns so terribly for the touch, the whisper of voice, the kiss and hug, the smile they loved so dearly.

My heart is with you through these times hun.
Believe !!! you will be together again.

Without God ... there is no heaven ... and I wholeheartedly BELIEVE there is a heaven and your John is there and you will be one again hun.

~Big hugs~ BELIEVE hun.

And when the days are long and the nights are even longer and you feel alone .... close your eyes and you will feel his arms wrapped tightly around you.
Love ya
Luanne

Aw Cindy !
I really love this one
actually the fact that it didn't rhyme made it even more beautiful
I loved the ending so much, despite the sadness in it.

If the wind blows through the trees just right
I can almost hear your voice calling my name

Those lines took my breath away, my fave part..nicely written

Very well done on this hun
write on xx

Cindy, that was a beautiful piece indeed !
Actually the fast that it didn't rhyme made it even more beautiful.
I loved the ending so much, despite the sadness it held..

If the wind blows through the trees just right
I can almost hear your voice calling my name

Those lines took my breath away..truly nicely written, my fave part :)

I commented on the poem once but I don't know where the hell did my comment escape, lol !

Anyway this was a great read.
Write on
xx

Geezus cindy!
this has to be the most heart breaking poem i've read. and definitely one of your best. i'm still crying and i've read it about four times. i'm about to go read it again.
heartbreakingly beautiful.

love you!
-Liz

This is a really great poem. I like the style, and imagery. You were really able to express the feeling of "heartbreak" very well.

As always such a truly beautiful and heartwarming piece. 5/5 It brings depth and feeling to me.

They way you convey your sadness is truly beautiful. Your poem fills me with sadness, although it's nothing compared to what you actually feel. It is a beautiful tribute to the one you Love.

I feel your words, I hear your words, I see your words, I know your words, I know your voice.
Cindy you are a gentle soul, one who feels.
You still catch me off guard with your poetry like no other.
I truly hope you are well.
I have always and will hold dear kind thoughts of you.
5/5 for a heartfelt piece,

"Sometimes I think it's all a dream
I'll wake up you'll be there
Smiling at me with that grin
the one I fell in love with"

My heart constricted when i read this stanza.
And it goes out to you at the same time!

I've missed your poetry so much Cindy. You have a way with words few can match

Love Gem x

The sense of sadness is felt in these words you have expressed in this write. May you find peace and joy deep within your heart once again soon.

sadaddy