by Jessica Nov 9, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This plague devours millions |
by Dave
I think its pretty dam good |
by ruth
I like the last line.... " A cure within grasp, if you could stop before you start" it kinda gave me the chills lol. Keep up the good work! |
by ruth
I really liked it :) |
by Luke
Very nice very nice. |
I think you've got great wording, and not only that, I think you structure your lines and stanza wonderfully. |