by Amber Nov 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Slowly and elegantly he walks down the stairs towards me. |
The structure of the poem was very good. As was the flow and rhyme scheme. I was just curious about one thing: had she just met this guy? 5/5 |
by HvN
Towards the end I was thinking this should've gone on the explicit section of poetry, but you didn't describe any sexual related activity in detail so I guess it fits here ;] |