Towards the end I was thinking this should've gone on the explicit section of poetry, but you didn't describe any sexual related activity in detail so I guess it fits here ;]

OVerall the poem is very good, you've gotten so much better since day one, if only people would read your stuff more they'd realize that they've been missing out on a lot!

5/5

The structure of the poem was very good. As was the flow and rhyme scheme. I was just curious about one thing: had she just met this guy? 5/5