Very Very GOOD!!!! i feel like that everyday..........like the person u wanna see is traped and replaced by someone you don't know very good 5/5

Amazin! The flow was superb for me and i can relate to it, thankfully im happy now and proud, excellent poem 5/5

I know this feeling very well!
I'm happy now thanks to one guy who changed my world around!
I used to hide behind my smile of lies!
well written!
xo 5/5

Very wel written. a lot of people in this generation feel this way, like they cant be who they really wana be, i no i wana be different, but if you stare hard enough trust me you can fiind wat your searching for in that glass and behond.. you are very talented poet and thats one thing you can look forward to..

Keep it up!
*Hunny*