Comments : Breathe.. (String senryu)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You will get plenty of both from me, my friend!
    So, this was the word of kindness and now...*smiles so sweetly*, ha ha ha!

    I love this beautiful verse, Michael!

    (((hugs)))

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow. This was such a beautiful write. The last stanza had to be my favorite.. it just left me speechless... it was worded so perfectly. Keep it up. You are very talented. I don't think there's a form that you cannot write flawlessly.

    Well done.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tamon G

    "Beauty lives in smiles,
    in a moment of kindness."

    I can't agree anymore. Very warm and beautiful words you used in this poem. Great work. Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Feelings of peace and happiness can be felt when reading this poem. I really like the way the last line of each verse tie together. Those 3 lines could stand alone as another poem. It was a joy to read. Thanks for writing such wonderful verses.

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    How I loved this one as well. In this site of depression and cutters what a breath of fresh air you are ^-^ Keep up the wonderful work.