I like the way you didn't hold back on this piece...
and as always i love the way you think...

"Erratic heartbeat
Freezing hands
Foreign lands
Shifting sands"
>>>i don't think this part connects with the whole poem...i really like the meaning and every thing but the poem can flow a lot better without it.. anyway other than that i give you a 5/5 keep it up!

This is cool. It is creative and slightly random. I like it as it is, despite the fact some pieces may not fit in the entire puzzle, that just makes it even cooler. Anyway awesome job from me.

Yes, so creative and free
I loved the simplicity of this amidst the complexness of it

and it was awesome

love
Tara
xxx