A Rain on Life, So Blue

by Unrequited   Nov 11, 2008


A blue in storm from eye-light torn;
your night is rain-soaked!
lush gaze onto hearts
breaking life when prayers
die lost and in where
one breath brings tears
and folds up memories
cold,
for wind-whipped thunder crashes
blue into your night soaked
in tears you forgot to forget.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Your format is so unique, and I love how you write your poems.. I really don't know how to explain it, lol.. but it's like with the exclamation points you really make the reader think WOW! Intriguing piece you have penned here. Well Done. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I like this one. The format is a little different but thats a good thing. The wording is good. Igave it a 5/5.

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