I like this one. The format is a little different but thats a good thing. The wording is good. Igave it a 5/5.

Your format is so unique, and I love how you write your poems.. I really don't know how to explain it, lol.. but it's like with the exclamation points you really make the reader think WOW! Intriguing piece you have penned here. Well Done. 5/5.