This poem gave rain and ocean water a whole new meaning for me. Its a very dark poem and i loved it keep writing

Oh, what a great write indeed
Another amazing piece from you.
the best thing about this poem is that I had the imagery right before my eyes, and this is what I call good poetry !

I keep staring at the water
I keep staring at my grave
The rain begins to pour
...Must be the Angels, crying for the brave

I liked this stanza most..gave me chills
I got no other words to say
Amazing one

xx