Comments : Live or Die Trying

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Okay..this was a VERY strong dark piece..why doesn't it have any rating >.< urgh sometimes I really do hate people on this site for not appreciating good poetry.
    That was a very good one you penned here.
    The wording was amazing and the stanzas were really strongly rhyming !

    Falling from grace
    Has a hard landing
    But before I beg to live
    I'll proudly die standing

    This stanza..as a beginning one, was just so catchy and perfect..submitting it as the first one made me completely interested in reading the poem.

    I won't be taken easily
    I refuse to go without a fight
    I'll die for what I believe
    Whether or not I'm wrong, I'm right

    This one I liked too SO MUCH..I'm gonna recommend this poem to my pals :) you did a wonderful job on this one.

    I seriously like it..I'm gonna fave it !!
    Write on
    xx