Why??
by Xx Shiny StarxX Nov 11, 2008
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Look u told me u love me bt i now dat deep inside u never cared about me so now im liyng here 2nite ready for death..y coulnt u just tell me strait out and i could have save my wrisks from da pain and da blood...so go and take har bak bt wen ur on her arms kissing u ill bet u da only ting ull be tinking bout...WHY did u just save another soul??? |
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15 years agoby Em
Sad but emotion, 5/5. Em
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15 years ago
by Obscura
This is how i think it should be written
Look you told me you love me but i know that deep inside you never cared about me. So now im lying here tonight ready for death..Why couldnt you just tell me straight out? And i could have saved my wrists from the pain and the blood...So go and take her back but when your on her arms kissing you ill bet you the only thing you will be thinking about...WHY did you just save another soul???
this is the grammaticaly correct way to write it but the emotion is great
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15 years ago
by Ian Robert
Nice
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16 years ago
by Saving Grace
This is intense and powerful, and theres alot of anger in this write? Anyways, nice work. keep it up.
