Meant To Be

by Cara   Nov 11, 2008


Your hands placed upon my waist
Our love for each other, never to be replaced
My fine silk dress pressed up against you
Your eyes tell me, that your love for me is true

My love for you will never end
You are the air I breathe my friend
I need you in my life, so it can be complete
Me without you, is my heart without a beat

You must have tripped me, because I fell so fast
I can tell you now, our love will last
It will last forever; I will always be by your side
Your every secret, in me you can confide

Hold me close now, never let me go
Every moment I am with you, I glow
You mean everything to me
You and I, we are meant to be

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  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow this is so sweet.

    My love for you will never end
    You are the air I breathe my friend
    I need you in my life, so it can be complete
    Me without you, is my heart without a beat.

    favourite stanza.
    Honestly awseome work

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I can tell how this poem have originality in her imagery , the usage of "you tripped me" the actula tripping to express how fast you fell for him is an amaising image i never seen in amy poem .

    and the usage of "glowing " when you are with him :
    being with the one we love alwasy take out the best of us and make us shine in his eyes.
    and many poets try to express that fact but they fail to be that simple .

    i can say i enjoy your simplicity in this poem and you made me smile for a long time and imagine the situation.

    you are well deserving the 5/5 .

    great !

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I agree with Shokry, i like tt expression too
    this is a beautiful poem indeed that has a very nice flow

    keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    "me without you, is my heart without a beat", i like this line most :-)

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    I loved this so much because it gave me a really happy feeling when I read it. You chose very nice way to describe the topic. 5/5

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